First minute of edited footage

This is the first minute of edited footage from my imagioned film 'Deal with the Devil'. For this first scene I had to do two shoots as the first set of footage had many mistakes which needed correcting. 

In this piece of edited footage there are some shots which need to be filmed again, for example at the beginning of the diegetic dialogue the lighting changes between shots making the continuity of the film no right. Also I would like to film the shots were she picks the phone up to take the call, for this I had to speed the footage up because she didn't pick the phone up at the correct pace, because of the speeding up the footage doesn't look right and almost seems as though it's in slow motion. 

As well as filming those shots I am also considering getting the actress to say her first few lines without cuts in between, I think this will help the flow of this scene because now it's looking as though there are gaps in time which I didn't want. 

However I am very pleased with the editing and I am also pleased with the shots that I have captured a part from this few mistakes, which will be corrected in a third re-shoot.